All Comments on 'Rug Burn'

by Sanzamour

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Run fool while you can. He has nobody to blame but himself when Amber cheats on him again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well Written

Heartbreak ahead unless he decides to end this relationship. Your word picture of the scene and their relationship is so real I hope you are not yourself in such a relationship.

rg27612rg27612over 10 years ago
Rang true for me

Nothing like finding out she is stepping out by smelling his cum on her breath when she comes home late from work...

Dude should leave and not say goodbye.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story was well written. Good flow and good end leaving it open to another chapter which it needs.

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If you are looking for stylistic prose and meticulous plotlines, Sanzamour probably isn't your cup of tea. I have one mood: horny AF. When that boils over, it usually ends up in print somewhere. I do plan on adding more to this collection and would appreciate you coming along ...