All Comments on 'Ruined'

by edrider73

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Better than usual, ed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I quit reading when you wrote that a partner in the biggest private equity firm didn't have 15k.

Either you don't know squat about being a partner in any firm or you don't know the first thing about money. Fuck, I have 80k in the bank and I work in a fucking warehouse.

Stories have to follow certain parameters, c follows b which follows a, or it's just a fucking mess. And this became a giant pile of dogshit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Blah blah blah, thats what I got from the first half page I read 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wonderful

I read it all, and in response to the other reviews, they stopped reading to soon. An amazing read, not much in the way of erotica. I was hoping it would end the way it did, I loved that you showed that deviant sexual practices, and good Christian morals and beliefs are not mutually exclusive, and that you can be both

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What!

What utter BS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Now he needs 8 pages for his sick crap!!!

That author is one brain sick buddy!! He needs mental help. After reading the first page and the last one its clear that he is a pathetic wimp who needs his writing for his own therapy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sick story

Score 1*

49greg49gregabout 5 years ago
Loved it

Great story.

The author is a Romantic at heart. Twisted, but a romantic.

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