All Comments on 'Rule of Thumb Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

wow!! how very embarsing!! i hope she was late for dinner and got more punishment instead of dinner then she had to cook you diner in the nude with a red ass bottom!!

ElRoylkElRoylkover 9 years agoAuthor
Loren's impending punishment

Nice idea. Just wait, tho'. I hope the punishment I've got for Loren/Elke gets is even more embarrassing than that!

jhollanderjhollanderover 9 years ago
Nice Intro

I really enjoyed everything about this first chapter. You expressed well their emotions, confusions, and uncertainties which led to an incredibly realistic and ultimately very erotic scene between them. I look forward to the next chapter!

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And as always, I enjoy hearing from you and hope these stories give you much needed pleasure.

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