by ElRoylk
wow!! how very embarsing!! i hope she was late for dinner and got more punishment instead of dinner then she had to cook you diner in the nude with a red ass bottom!!
Nice idea. Just wait, tho'. I hope the punishment I've got for Loren/Elke gets is even more embarrassing than that!
I really enjoyed everything about this first chapter. You expressed well their emotions, confusions, and uncertainties which led to an incredibly realistic and ultimately very erotic scene between them. I look forward to the next chapter!