All Comments on 'Run and Hide Pt. 02'

This story has both good and bad points. I like the characters and the way the story is unfolding; it has a very natural flow. What I don't like is that Ace is going for one major hurt. I question that he would allow Paul into his life at all. He was hurt badly enough once to relocate and now he's knowingly making the same mistake. I do think he should have put up a bit more resistance, despite the attraction.

I love this! You tell a great story! Tension, humor, angst, passion.....love it!!!!

waiting on chapter 3

If this story gets any hotter it's going to spontaneously combust. More please.

Your writing is great. I've seen this type of plot done again and again, but I'm so into the character's that it doesn't feel cliche or the same old thing. Thanks for sharing!

I love these two so far.

I have faith in you to show us their journey, Ace learning to trust again and Paul that its OK to come out of the closet, esp for love.

This story has gotten me addicted. Can't stop,lol

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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thank you for the giggles and the sighs! I can't wait for the next chapter.. and thank you for the quick post of the 2nd one

Love the development on this story and the obvious chemisty between the two of them. I imagine that Holly will figure things out between Paul and Ace soon if not already. Great story.

This story has it all. Yeah, maybe Ace should have avoided Paul like the plague, seeing as how he's almost a duplicate of Cameron, but that's love and life. You can feel the two of them getting under each others skin. Sinfully addicting. Thanks.

u r genius!!!! very hot!

Paul and Ace are awesome together. I hope Paul finds his way out of his closet!

The best part of the story, makes me laugh and pant at the same time the way Paul just takes Ace by surprise - twice at least. Top score for this chapter.

Write a book. Write many. I will buy them all ... twice

Haha, I loved when Paul was badgering Ace with questions. Tsk tsk, so jealous.

Great chapter x

Have to agree with everyone brilliant am hooked and jealous and second that comment don't stop writing and if you write a book/s will buy for sure

Love it love it.... and that last line reminded me of the Plain White T's

I love this story!!!!

I don't know how many times I have read this story but love it.

I don't trust this closet queen ! Massages ! Really??

At the expense of poor Ace's feelings! The guy's only human for fucks' sake!

"What you do to me" is still not good enough !!

Oh man ! There are still ... how many parts? At least two ! We'll see ...

A very funny moment, that really made me roar - when Paul said he was used to being a masseur to his mom, Ace reacts thinking of Paul giving his mom sexy massages: "I'm going to go ewww on that" - really funny ... ^^

Oh wait, I skipped to the last chapter's last page to find out the ending..

I still can't believe Paul was accusing Ace of being easy/a slut because he had sex w/him in the most private place in that bar! Like, really? I swear when some men get the best they've ever had, they somehow manage to fuck it up!

Is he even gonna be there when Ace wakes up or dip out like the last time?

I like that this author chose to emphasize condom usage. Its important in the gay community to remember that safe sex is still good sex. In movies and TV shows they glamorize unprotected sex, but its essential that people realize that in reality there are consequences along with these actions.

I've read this several times....and just love the 4 part series. The last ''erotic" scene here is so real...no over the top descriptions. Excellent!

I still think this is a classic, love it!