All Comments on 'Runaway Monkey'

I was laughing right out loud for much of the story. The escape/chase was very funny. Thanks much for writing.

I always enjoy your stories. I like proactive men,why wait, hide in closets, just lay it on the line. Stopping it before it starts is the best way, Thanks!

Another great story! And funny as hell, too.

Boyd

Belongs in the humor section.

good job. very enjoyable.

Humurous tale of thwarting a Lothario before he could get warmed up.. Seeing a gorilla driving a car is an experience; one I saw in Evanston once.. Couldn't hardly believe what I saw.. Interesting bit in story, he stole bananas rather than a sandwich somewhere!! Fit perfectly with the police report!! ... If you did not have help with the English, you have done a remarkable job with it in a short period of time.. Good job all around, WF..

I was absolutely howling in glee, reading this story. Thanks, Winterfrog, what a delightful story to wake up in the morning. Good job!

this stories was more to the point and no culture problems.good job.

Finally, a story in which the wife(girlfreind/fiance) actually stays true to her an and the donjuan dipshit gets what is coming to him. Yay Winterfrog.

reading about a gorilla driving a car reminds me of Pink Panther movies. Love it!!

loved...hahahahaha....it....sorry...hahahaha,,,,can't .......hahahahahaha.... stop....hahahahahah ......laughing...........

Funniest story I've read in a long long time. This one should be made into a movie.

A monkey in a boat is just plain funny! But, a monkey stealing bananas is a 5 star hoot!!! Thanks for a great laugh!

Great story, but the beginning was too much " I don't care a shit...". That gets really tiring really fast.

It reminds me of the chase scene in "What's New Pussycat."

Nice to see the good guys win one. I enjoyed the read - regards, Jack

WHAT DO YOU KNOW! It’s Buster Keaton meets winter frog in a monkey suit! What a hilarious slapstick summer matinee! All I was missing to totally come back in time to my youth is the sound of rolling bottles down the movie theatre (no carpets) and the whistles and helpful warnings to the runaway hero: “Behind you!!!” at critical moments. I demand a follow up of this team’s adventure AT LEAST until September!

great job! reminds me of that Eddie Murphy movie (forgot the title).

Have to say it was slow at the start but turned out to be one if the best stories I've read in months.Best laugh I've had in a long time. Look forward to seeing you write more like this.

I didn't know you can write comedy. Well Done. -- by Thor

Top ten of all

What a really cool story. I'm a hopeless romantic so this was good old fun to read. Pretty silly. Hope I can find another one of your stories as fun as this one.

What a delightful and very funny story.

She did what men do and claim as good - either it is okay to go out and learn or it is not - just be consistent -

Very nice job and a lot of fun was had by all - well most all lol

4* for a very funny story I could really picture.

Very funny! I really enjoyed it! Thanks.

Well-written, fast paced and funny story.

I didn't know that you did humor. Good job!

to defend and protect. TK U MLJ LV NV

Spelling is still a problem i,e, "quite when it should have been quiet".

More fun than a barrel of.monkey.

This is a amusing story. What amazes me is that a grammar Nazi can read it or understand it, Maybe they can’t and only look for errors in anyone’s writing?

Boo grammar Nazi, Congratulations writer.

5 stars and favorite

I give out few but I actually laughed out loud more than once

Your best story by far

Play girl reformed guy smart enough to recognize her worth and good friends to help

Screw grammar errors etc great

Probably my favorite of WF's stories. When it started out going over how much of a slut Melissa had been when she'd been younger I figured I was in for a typical cheating story. The whole tone changed after they got engaged though, pleasantly so. After that it was just pure entertainment. Well done.

Once you get the writer's style down, it turns into a really good story.

What fun!

Loved it.

5* The Funniest LW story ever! This story made a monkey out of me. Write On! I now have a craving for bananas.

This would be a great short film, hilarious. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I agree with Bebop03. After rereading this story and laughing out loud throughout, this has to be the funniest story on Literotica. It sure beats anything I've seen in the Humor section. The mental images remind me of Benny Hill at his finest.

Από της καλύτερες ιστορίες εδώ γέλασα με την καρδία μου μπράβο...............

That story sounds like the base line of events that were taken from an old Keystone Kops movie because I had trouble reading through the tears caused by laughing so hard.

Silly but darn funny.

Had a good laugh. 😝

FUNNY.

You should have put this in the Humor section. Still an LOL story. *****

Awesome. Great work typical of Winterfrog.

BTB imbeciles should read this to see how a good and funny story is made with a good plot.

It is sad that WF is not around any more while dimwits writing cliche crap with moralizing or cuckolding are in ever bigger numbers.

In LW one just needs some moronic plot with these elements ...

'wife wants to go out with another man - I begged, I cried, I moralized, she cheated - I hired PI to video her infidelities - I posted that on internet and sent to her parents - I divorced her - she is begging to reconcile but I said firmly "no" - she is shunned by eveybody - I found superbeautiful rebound woman that loves me, only me.'

... to get high rating from resident BTB imbeciles.

Nonsense.

Hilarious escape from King Kong

WTF?

LOL, this story would make a really good movie.

very amusing tale

Hubby was not confused by the fact that Melissa so abruptly expressed a desire to have children, exactly, after meeting the DJ? Did she have any previous meetings with the seducer, which the "omniscient" husband did not know about? Will a child be born, in an incomprehensible way, similar to a hockey player?

Mimi, my pet female chimpanzee, got damn excited when I read this story out loud to her. Apparently, she did not realize that it was a man in a monkey costume and thought that we were talking about a real gorilla who stole a bicycle, a boat and two cars. Of course, in the brains of this monkey slut, he was a real alpha male, worthy of shaggy cubs. Barely pacified this lustful monkey bitch.

Stupid… plus the story was “told” to the audience, instead of the audience being “shown”. Poorly written and inane.

So, they drugged the asshole? If, he would have fell ill or died. They would be locked up for a long time.

Not exotic but Original, happy and funny. Well written