All Comments on 'Runner Girl Ch. 05'

I wish each chapter were a little longer, but I'm so glad we are getting one each day. It makes me look forward to the morning! So good! Can't wait until tomorrow!

Is reading your sweet stories. Thanks for sharing your talent.

This author can write! Interesting characters and story, too, and she can hold my interest even though this genre is not my favorite. This seems to be pro quality stuff; maybe that's in the future, huh? Oh, and the running reads "right" to a runner.

If you get too many compliments you may start writing crap just to get them. Love your writing. Love that you actually finish a story unlike so many!

Keep at your craft.

Wow, having read your other series, I have been waiting for this one to start posting. It was well worth the wait; each post is just a bit better than the last, and that is going some. Your plots lines do not seem contrived just to titillate; thanks for a good read.

I can't wait until the next chapter...

After reading the first chapter I wanted to put this down until you finished and read it all at once. Dammit girl that turned out to be a wasted thought, I go looking for this every morning.

You have a talent, true talent.

Been five stars all the way.

Thankyou.

I like Amy but John though rich and charming appears to be a arragant ass

Amy seems like a good sport, I like her. A metro sexual, useless end of the world kind of guy like John are a dime a dozen. Pity he seems to be getting the girl.

I do like the writing, even if the story is not to my liking.

Maybe it's just because I remember him from Flower Girl and remember what a terrific friend he was to William during the critical moment in that story, but I'm willing to cut him a lot of slack just because I trust William and Tracy's judgment. And he's creative and generous, even if more of a gallivanting rake than I'd prefer.

The guy has some growing to do, but don't we all?

It has been very enjoyable to notice the improvement in your writing since the first part of your trilogy began. I am enjoying John as well as Amy and I'm also enjoying the scenario that you are painting of their falling in love together. You have become a much better writer and I compliment you, your editor and your Beta reader. Every good author needs help. ;-))

doing nice things and falling in Love.

"I didn't realize we'd be driving. Last time I took the metro."

Metro North? New Yorkers either use the full name, or just call it "the train" if it's already been defined in the conversation. I suspect Amy has been in NYC long enough to know this.

If you're referring to the subway, we either use "train" or "subway". The nearest metro stop is in Greenbelt, Maryland.

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So far, the series is good. I wonder when the conflict will occur. There's also usually a Big Secret in romances, which I guess we'll learn about Amy's via her therapy.

and each chapter is soooooo short