All Comments on 'Running on Empty'

by SapphoLust

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Runing

I like the storyand would like to see more chapters. A real good start.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Very well told and very hot

Very compelling stories, characters, and sex. Please keep writing

xoxo,

Di

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 7 years ago

A decent storyline but careless on the grammatical error and duplication of the story back to back. You could have benefited greatly from an editor or just someone to proofread it. Still with this being said, you have a foundation to work from, so please continue.

(Please try to correct this story. It starts from the beginning once you get to the end).

Tinkerbell25Tinkerbell25almost 6 years ago
Love

OMG!!! I love it please continue this story

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