All Comments on 'Running Riot'

Thoroughly enjoyable, well done.

Glad you enjoyed!

The story is a long one, and you skillfully kept the dramatic tension going (I also learned some things about skinheads, a topic on which I was poorly informed.) However, I was disappointed by the ending. I was expecting some sort of very dramatic, surprising denouement, and instead, I got two orgies. Now, for many Lit readers, that is just what the doctor ordered. But since you had sustained a literary dimension all the way up to that point, so it would have been nice to have both kinds of climax at the end.

Constructive criticism's always welcome, AlwaysHungry, thanks for taking the time to read. Absolutely there are certainly different directions a story like this could've taken, and I try to strike a balance between what's narratively interesting and what's sexy to me at a given time. Always something to keep thinking about, for sure.

Loved the dive into the skinhead scene, something I know nothing about. Great action scenes and I loved the big match. You sure kept me reading right to the end.

Always a pleasure to get comments, especially from writers whose talent I respect. Glad you enjoyed.

CyranoJ, you are a very good writer. I enjoy your characters quite a bit. While your sex scenes are good, the story is even more intriguing and interesting. Thanks.

Very glad you enjoyed the story, sotaro.