All Comments on 'Running Scared Ch. 03'

A bit spare to start but assuming that it's going to be a long story that makes perfect sense. I'm only disappointed that I found this when you were only three chapters in. I'd like to see a bit more from Kita's perspective. Her introduction gave her a bit of a stronger personality in my mind. That's not necessarily relevant as it's not my story :) and I've thoroughly enjoyed it so far. Just thought I'd throw my two cents in. Please keep working on this. I like your tone and the "mental" dialog comes off as very natural.

I can't wait to read more. :-) great story so far. :-)

cannot wait to read more of this story but can you make it longer may be 2 or more pages