All Comments on 'Running with the Pack'

please tell me there's a part 2 coming soon

Hey folks,

Splathouse here. Wasn't intending on making a part 2, but if there's enough demand I absolutely will.

I have already completed a second half for another story I've written-The Farm, about a lactating minotaur. I just got back from vacation and will post it here within the next day or so.

We are also going to have a sequal to 8 legged freaking when I have time, and I'm back with a working computer.

-SH

Yes to part two, but you might consider an introduction to the story as well. This reads like it's the middle, or beginning middle, of the story rather the start.

This was pretty good . But your correct in that it need more to round out the characters .

tx cracker

A second part would be amazing. Hopefully with more excitement to go with it.

I'm down for another chapter of this story. It's really good. Maybe introduce some of the other species that were mentioned.