by BlueWolfDancer4454
I've never read a werewolf story where the change can be triggered by anything but a mating bite, love it!
Wow, this chapter had me on edge, wonderful!
Can't wait for the next!
~ Masterskitten26
But he wasn't raised by wolves so he never manifested???
Wow! Fabulous. Can't wait for further developments. Great story. Thank you.
I really love your series, I check every day for the off chance you submitted something earlier than normal. I love the work and take all the time you need, but I am a greedy person I really don't like waiting, but I will try my best to not spam the hell out of you with praise.
-Soul Ulyus
Great story telling, I love how you develop the story and characters, but the cliffhanger are killing me :)
While reading previous chapters, I always thought Dom was alpha of his pack of friends.He was all ready their leader and they looked to him for guidance.He was always strong for a human and put his pack before himself as alphas do.Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter.
I can't belive you ended it there!!!!! Not fair! Please please please post the next chapter soon!!!
I almost never beg ..but ....pleaseeeeeeee post moreeeeee ...fasterrrrrrr....snif :'(
Of what was happening to Flint, I did not see what was coming with Dominic! Good one. Please don't make me wait a week...if my fingernails are chewed down to the nub it will be your fault - ack!
So good to see it come true. Its one thing to know that something is the way it is, but without the story behind it, its not nearly as satisfying. What I'm saying is, I love reading this, even knowing where its going I still love the journey you lay out for us. Thanks.
Thank you for bringing something new to the werewolf stories...it has being so long since Bound to my mate and BTBB, that is refreshing to get something new and awesome...looking forward to see the next chapter. Regards
That's what makes this such a good story. It doesn't follow the formula at all. You have based this story on some very unique questions about what would happen if... If the mating bond doesn't over ride the very real complications of negative first impressions? If Misty and Dominic kind of hate each other and have to figure out how to have a relationship? If Flint couldn't bond with his wolf because he couldn't accept his own instincts and repressed them to the point where he and his wolf became disassociated from one another? If the Alpha pair did not have all the answers and made some wrong decisions. If a human can pack-bond with a wolf before the human has accepted his own wolf. Gay wolves?
Well done! I am looking forward to the rest of this story unfolding.
I am so excited to reading this story. I am always on pins and needles waiting on the next chapter. Keep up the great story. I know we all will a be waiting. :)
great build up on a unique story re Dominic as a human strong enough to bond with and resolve Flint's issues. There were already hints of Garret and Dominic being able to help Flint. But I feel there has been very little hints on Misty's mating bond towards Dominic. Almost platonic in fact.Her wolf should have been more affected or more sensitive to Dominic's plight. Understandably, most werewolf stories have explored that story line of conflicted mating bond into a highway now, but I think it would have increased the anticipation and nuance of Dominic's experience. Unless of course you have another Flint-esque twist planned for Misty.
I totally loved this chapter! Thank you for not killing off Flint. I am really enjoying the twists and turns and did not even mind the cliff hanger this time LOL! Although I want more more more...Don't rush things let them play out. You are extremely talented.
Dominican is obviously an alpha. He has been the leader of his family for a long time and his family's blanket acceptance of Flint as himself and not what people wanted him to be saved his life. I love that. Now, Misty needs to make a real choice. She can either accept Dominican as he is, whatever that will be or lose him all together as Garret and Flint become part of his pack. The rest of his family too. I think Sarah's twins may have to also if they want her. Misty may get her way and be an alpha, but I don't think she will be stronger than Dominic. This is so getting good. If I am wrong, feel free to surprise me.
🙌🏻 I love this story!!! I am so happy you didn't kill off Flint! Please give us a new chapter soon!!
Ok ch 8 was ordinary
I thought it a failed ending
Now I'm won back
This ch has S T Y L E
I love this story!!! If you still need an editor please let me know. Im an english major 😀 and I became a huge fan literally over night lol. Email me at wawfer@gmail.com if your interested :)
thats it i am tired of your epic cliff hanger endings to chaters if i go back and see that you are one of the oones tha abandend your story then i will send the denisendends of hell to feast on your soul and if you are just taking your time updating then i will send my best perswasion men to get you to update faster i love it that much
I have been reading here for a long time (years), ignore date of my joining lit. This is one of the few stories I have kept reading from chptr to chptr without switching to another story to keep my interest.
BWD you really know how to spin a yarn.
Now to the next part...
After years of reading many stories, only a few keep my interest to read one without a break. Normally I just read a couple of pages then swap to another story. This one has me opening the next part and keep reading.
Great tale, wonderfully told.