by sxwriter42
a wonderful story very well written . . and from things I have learned over the years . . parts of it are not very far from reality . . .
very nicely done
An excellent piece: realistic plot, finely written, superb sex, and a happy ending. Couldn't be better! Congratulations.
very enjoyable. I love happy endings! Like the train car escapade as well!
It was so well written. I absolutely adore stories that go into such detail. Hope to see more!
being a romantic person myself I absolutely adored ur story, very well written with a meaningful plot too. I enjoyed ur story. please keep writing.God bless wish u luck.
Anaisha, India
Thank you for your hard work. It was lovely! You do what I do and write too much back story for some on this site, but I did really like it!
Loved every bit of it...I couldn't stop reading it. Everything was perfect...just what I like to read!!!
You have done a best job.. its not only story but to a stept to create awareness in society to help others out of troubles. Plus you also wrote so nicely about True Love and how can we differentiate Love and Sex by body language and expressions.
Keep it up buddy..!!!
Totally worth reading.
A wonderful story with a very good plot and just oh-so-romantic.
I've read some stories in Literotica but this is the first time that I made a comment. Your story is definitely sweet and romantic. It's the most enjoyably detailed story in this site. It could be a great novel if you make more chapters. Anyway, i looove this story. Thanks a zillion!
That was truly a lovely story. Please write another in a similar vein, as this was absolutely wonderful.
Wonderful story. A shame that slavery with the prostitution is increasing worldwide. So much love written in the story of two people but many live two lives - doing what they are forced to do but wanting something much better. Peace and blessings!
Great story, pete and ludmila's characters are both well written
This story could easily be expanded into a TV movie or a TV show--like a NCIS character falling for the Russian beauty. Hell, might even get Mark Harmon a wife after several episodes.
Nicely done! Erotic and well written too.
Only it seemed that Pete would have had to struggle a bit more with how he wanted to proceed with his inter most feelings about Ludmila after seeing for himself, what she was being forced to do on cctv. It would seem that most men would be trying to figure out weather or not if they should follow their head or their cock, after a few drinks.
In fact what might happen next between those two could be an even more devastating story of obsessions and passions.