All Comments on 'Ryan Family Ch. 06'

need to get going very fast :) Im waiting :)

you are making it to complicated by adding so many people you forgot the biggest rule to good writing ( KISS- KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID ) this applies espcially to incest. the more people you add the easier it is for one of them to get mad and blow the whistle on the rest. thanks for ruining a story that COULD have been good if you had kept it SIMPLE.