All Comments on '(S)He Who Brings the Rain'

Great story! The names and some of the words were difficult for me, but there were enough context clues that it didn't distract from the story.

SO UNIQUE AND WELL WRITTEN! One of my favorites absolutely!

Absolutely fantastic job. I loved this story arc and your writing. Well done indeed.

Very enjoyable to read, it mesmerize me. Good job!

Absolutely fantastic story!!!

[Insert smallpox joke here.]

But in all seriousness, great job, looking forward to more.

I think I have found a new favorite author! Loved LOVED LOVED this! Amazing job

Oh my god! THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!! I can imagine how much time and effort was put into creating this. I LOVE the buildup!!! Thank you so much inka <3

I was literally in tears at the end!!!! ❤❤❤❤

I love how thought out and well written this is. I have to say it is definitely my favorite on this site.

Thank you so much, that was an amazing story! I was so thrilled to find it was all posted... and I loved the ending! I'd hoped that was where it was leading, but was a little concerned there for a minute!

JOB!

I am absolutely in love with this. I love that you used Nahuatl history in this story and it couldn’t have been better. You really went into depth and put the time and effort into really sharing the experience with your audience. Thank you 🤍 “A fellow Náhuatl”

THIS FUCKS

The story was such a fine work of words that reaps magic.

It's both ancient and thrilling -

perfect ratio of story to sexy. also made me want to learn about nahuatl culture wow

Honestly one of the most unique stories I've ever read and certainly the best one on bere by far!!!

Such a great read. I’ll admit to knowing very little about Nahuatl culture but this was a fascinating introduction. I enjoyed the characters, the setting, and the way in which you maintained the level of heat throughout the story. I look forward to your next tale.

Woah ... mind. blown! Read from start to finish without stopping! Definitely one of my favourites! 👏

Incredible! More stars for the master piece! Five is just not enough!