All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 02'

A bit rushed but I can see where you are going with it. Keep up the good work. I really hope Sabella isnt just dreaming hey. Lol. Cat

I love your other stories I've read on TST and this one seems just as good. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I think this story shows promise.

The story has a good start for sure but you should consider getting an editor...actually, all you really need to do is use spell check and it would fix all of the problems. Running into spelling errors throws off the flow of your amazing story, and sucks that something so small has to throw off the entire vibe. Think about it! Good work so far!

The story has a good start for sure but you should consider getting an editor...actually, all you really need to do is use spell check and it would fix all of the problems. Running into spelling errors throws off the flow of your amazing story, and sucks that something so small has to throw off the entire vibe. Think about it! Good work so far!

The story took a turn I didn't expect. Thanks

Loving the Alfred Hitchcock spin thus far...

i like that its not all just about the sex so quickly, you have to get into the story first.

This story should be in Sci-Fi with the time traveling Sabella has done. Earlier comment about the Texas hicks thing needs to be disregarded. I so like where it's going and can't wait to see how intertwined these two are going to be later on in the series. Syn'

The way you build up suspense is fantastic. I'm hooked and look forward to reading more. I like the main characters.

Highly rated!

and this seems to be one. In two chapters, you've got me invested in your characters, and curious how two people, both smart and independent, but from very different times work things out.

It also doesn't hurt I was born in '53, so I can relate to both time frames; wasn't nearly as much change from '50 to '68, as there was from '68 to '70! lol

GeoD