All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 08'

and the plot thickens.... this is a really great story i can't wait to find out what happens next. someone needs to teach caroline a lesson

Good story, with some serious spelling errors getting in the way.

Also, a black woman being a white mans mistress really wasn't such a big deal way back when.

I love this story!!!

Malcolm probably knows everyone who has hidden under the white sheet and hood in Culbert Co. and the mayor doesn't want that piece of info made public. Everyone already knows about Malcolm's father, so no big reveal there. Also, the mayor is enjoying a real nice set up that he doesn't want jeapordized.

So, is something going to develop between Sabella and Malcolm???

Until your next update!!

I am really liking this story. I like how Sabella and Malcom are growing closer. What does the Mayor know that keeps him in line with Malcom's wishes? Carolyn has GOT to get her come-uppings, hopefully from Sabella. If Sabella can go to the past, can Malcom go with her to the future? or will she remain with Malcom in the past? This is soooo interesting!

Carolyn needs to quit. Malcom is just not into you Caroyln.

Please allow Carolyn desendants being living in a trailer park in the future, with blue eye shadow, bad skin, and a wonderful waitress uniform!!! LOL Loved the update. Thanks

mspat you've done a great job developing the story and characters. I am a sucker for a good time travel theme.. just didn't expect to find it here ;-D I just wanted to show some love so the author will keep it coming!!

I'm dying to see what happens next!

Whoa someone is scare. Malcolm is the man but is he man enough to protect Sabella. OHHH I cannot wait to find out What is this legecy about WHY is the Mayor scare. What can Malcolm do? I am enjoy the story. I get happy when I see latest update. Get them coming and check your grammar.

This is a great story and I cannot wait for the next chapter! This is one of the best!

I was going to name my child raelynn screw you

Dont take that name too heart. It was only a joke. No big deal. Its a story.

The angry anon comment about raelyn brought tears to my eyes! Omg I laughed so hard hahaha

:-) yes indeed. This great story should be published.

Fitandtrimlady is the same fitandtrim whose profile is banned, due to cyber stalking and abusive language. He is a troll, do not be fool by his profile, indicating a woman. On his previous profile there is a different picture. This troll has mental problems

When are they gonna fuck???