by Sabineteas
You have given us many great stories and I am glad you are back. This one was not your best, but I enjoyed it very much. Keep entertaining us, please.
Started hot, switched to rape and abuse. A total turnoff to me, I choose Exhib&Voyeur and not NC for a reason.
A lot of typos but a good story. I'm not into the non consent stuff either, but I have read a lot of your stuff and I know that you do seem to be into it. You portray it well.
A new Sabine story! You were my inspiration for finally writing at Literotica. And 'making' my girlfriends exhibit themselves. Understanding the Sabine perspective helped me get into their heads . . . so um, thanks!
I've been a long time fan of Sabineteas' stories. they are so strong. These new additions seem like imitations of the original stories. They have all the ingredients but are missing the raw power of shameful humiliation, embarrassment and incredible eroticism. Not sure what is going on with these new stories. They feel hurried and in need of editing but most of all they don't seeth with the heat of female humiliation at the hands of a dominant woman or youthful man like the originals. I'm so happy to see Sabine back again and I'll keep following hoping the stories get better. Sabineteas has certainly been an inspiration to me and, I'm sure, many others Lit writers. Thank you, Sabineteas for returning.
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