by maybelkitty
This was pretty good until that ending. It was rushed and not very graceful. But I really did enjoy most of the work besides that.
The story was good but as I read it I suspected who grabbed her as she entered the door, so the end was not a real surprise. If it had been someone that really was there to hurt her she would have been made to suffer more. Some feel the end was rushed, I think it came to a natural conclusion.