All Comments on 'Safe'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Boring. Sorry-assed ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Almost

This was pretty good until that ending. It was rushed and not very graceful. But I really did enjoy most of the work besides that.

gentleoneexplorergentleoneexploreralmost 9 years ago

The story was good but as I read it I suspected who grabbed her as she entered the door, so the end was not a real surprise. If it had been someone that really was there to hurt her she would have been made to suffer more. Some feel the end was rushed, I think it came to a natural conclusion.

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