by virgin_sexpert
brilliant story. reading this got my own cock hard. just imaging slipping into that very horny wet pussy.almost got me cumming to. awesome writing so very erotic more of your very exciting hot horny stories would be good.
The story line is IMHO implausible, and without question it is very old and tired (usually some sweet young thing is caught in a sudden snowstorm) The author does get a lot of credit in my book for NOT locating the the narrator's hymen inches inside her vagina (as is common in this genre, and never so in nature), and further credit for not having her have an orgasm during her first experience of intercourse
sorry but i got to say 3 stars for this story did not go into depth at all just wham bam no thank you mam
Yeah, as the title mentions, I loved your story. It was one of the best on the entire site. I appreciate and applaud you for not making this overly racial like a lot of the interracial stories' authors do. You have potential to be a great erotica writer!