All Comments on 'Sally, Summer of Sex Ch. 26'

Seeing this story in he New Story listing served to introduce me to the work of this talented writer. I'll be forever grateful.

Keep up the good work!!

1. That this story just fissled out with so many loose ends

2. There were so many confusing name change errors. At one time you had Eva looking at Eva over the counter - and many more similar switches. Often it was not too hard to work it out but some were more difficult - particularly with switching Sally & Sarah's names.

3. The story lost some direction towards the end. It was as if the author was just trying to cram in as many different incidents as possible at the expense of the coherence of the story.

Having said all that, it was a good (not great, but good) story and I mostly enjoyed reading it. I give it 4*