All Comments on 'Sally's Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Not my usual cup of tea....(or pee as you put it :p) but totally turned me on! An amazingly sexy story! Looking forward to part II :) x

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago
drinks at 7 indeed!

GREAT STORY! Outstanding detail, nice long slow build up, and then plenty of hot wet action! The characters are so multi-dimentional that you HAVE to write another chapter.

what are the origins of her links? do they invite kim to stop by after her shift? who is the guy that joins them to fill brad's as he likes? (thought that little detail would slip by your readers didn't cha??!!)

Like the line from my Teacher's Pet story..."more please!"

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