All Comments on 'Sally's Cream Pies'

by ElectricBlue

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Missy10256Missy10256almost 9 years ago

What I especially loved about this story was the simultaneous telling of her in the bathroom, wishing he was with her, but also appreciating how he was loving her in a different way in the kitchen..I loved how you told what he was simultaneously doing in that kitchen to love on her as she was in the bathroom unwinding. Great story!

Avidreader3142Avidreader3142over 5 years ago
Just lovely !

Can't understand how this hasn't got more comments; so short, but so deep. Left me feeling warm all over , just like Rosalind.

Thanks

Paul

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.