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by SallyRene

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visioneervisioneerover 6 years ago

You have a propensity for the intense, SallyRene. (I also read 'A Master's Touch.')

While the depth and tenor of your submission and your Master's possessiveness is not my cup of D/s tea, your stories did hold my attention until the end. Putting on my editor/critical hat -- you write quite well, not shying away from the raw energy in you and your Master's interactions. More spoken dialogue from you would be welcome.

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

"Worship me cunt, show me what I meant to you."

And you deserve it because... ?

I didn't think so.

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I'm a married submissive with over 10 years of experience if different areas. My interests include a wide variety within the BDSM spectrum and also some vanilla is fine for a change.