All Comments on 'Sally's Seduction'

Absolutely Brilliant story. Wish there was more but you got right to the point and showed there is such a thing as true love.

very goooooooooood........

I would love to read more about you and Sally...

Tell us more.

Although you stated you're not an experienced writer, you could easily fool your readers. Your story was developed very well and was "believable" and is the stuff that spawns fantasies. I'd enjoy knowing more about your erotic pleasures with Sally.

If you'll keep writing your stories, you will draw a considerable following, and I'll surely be one of them.

Alece

I wish I was a girl

......when a guy poses as a woman writer. Seriously, how many women do you really know who use the "C" word????

....and I'm all female....and so is my girlfriend and she loves to use it too!! love this story....made both my girlfriend and i quite horny and our cunts oh so wet!

Hot Danm

i almost came myself

Definitely written by a male, even if posing as a woman.

soooo sexy. i loved it. i love all your stories

Yes, not that good, and for sure made up by a male.

I sure would love to hear what you and Sally did after

you did to Sally after you made her com at the pool.

The more kinky the better

Love that your stories are short and to the point...hot!