All Comments on 'Salvation in the Sargasso Sea Ch. 04'

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Phxray54Phxray54over 13 years ago
Well ordred chaotic patterns...

Life seems that way most of the time. Thank you for your story and certainly hope that you will continue to another in the near furture.

Golden rings, a "cymbal" of love, the unbroken circle a metafore for a whole life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Salvation what a beautiful word!!!

Just a tremendous story and the writing... I wish I could write like that... Thanks for sharing and looking forward to your next story.

RhomanovRhomanovover 11 years ago
Heck of a series

Really enjoyed the eb and flow of this tale.

Ncely done.

Thx.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good Story

Good but you didn't finish it you have to many loose ends

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well done, maybe

Just loved the story but the end just seemed rushed. Thought it had another chapter at least in it.

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