by thornapple
I enjoyed the story. You did a great job conveying some of the real life annoyances of living in a shared environment. I also enjoyed the progression of the female Character from not so likable to sympathetic. More than a few fetishes included in the story watersports, mild submission and shaving. It was also a fun sexy read. Not sure if it supports a sequel.
The story was great. I enjoyed it. Now, I will have to go back and read all your others one. Thanks for sharing.
Short, sweet, romantic and hot. Pretty much an unbeatable combination in a short story. I hope your other ones are as good. I will be checking that out right after finishing writing this!
Just... Use the toilet. The hell's with this towel. Is that even a thing?
It's still a decent enough story, but the towel-conceit was misguided, and frankly unneeded.
I usually like this guy’s stories, but I just couldn’t get into this. What’s with peeing into a towel? Carry her to the toilet!
Everything is a few weeks. The for sale sign was up for a few weeks. After it was taken down, it was a few weeks before she moved in. When she did move in, the guy had only lived there for a few weeks. A few weeks before her or before the for sale sign went up? So, he lived there a month or more? It’s not really important to the story, but an annoying little detail.