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by raquelr

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Why is this in noncon?

visioneervisioneeralmost 7 years ago

Your character development is skimpy, but I think you have a good setup for continuing your story. As for the non-con/reluctance angle, and to add tension, I suggest, in chapter 3, making Alejandro challenge Sammie's limits. You've positioned Nina perfectly to make this happen.

By the way, I liked Sammie's long dress. Have fun writing.

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