All Comments on 'Sammy's Birthday'

Excellent story beginning and first effort. I completely got the visuals of what was happening in each step of the story. You really painted the picture for me. You really got me hooked quickly and can't wait for more. Please continue with another chapter(s). Need to see how this plays out. 5 big stars

Looking forward to the next chapter. Very well done.

Very good! Looking forward to new chapters!

Small thing:

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I walked down to the kitchen and sat at the table, Mandy prepping the plates behind me. "Damn Daddy, you look so handsome." she said cheekily. "Thanks," I laughed. " you look quite beautiful yourself, birthday girl.

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Doesn't seem quite right. Sammy is the birthday girl, right, not Mandy.

title says it all