All Comments on 'Sandi and Tom in Paris'

but i would of had it the other way around bro fucking friend first and then sister catches brother fucking friend

Good read, decent detail but the writer needs to keep track of their characters better

I enjoyed it. No idea what the others were reading. Perhaps in future they should at least read a little bit before demonstrating their stupidity. Unlike me I take a lot of effort to be stupid. Anyway 4 star effort. Although I think the tour guide should have twigged and looked over the wall, then went with them for the night, or until they got to next stage of sex romp. Then 2 couples MF & FF swapping around is three times the fun.

I was hoping you'd keep the two escapades separate and add some sneaking around to it. It's still a great story though nonetheless. Waiting for the next chapter.

Loved this adventure and the two girls both fucking & sucking his dick.

more please, so much more licking and fucking to do yet.

Had a good concept. Basics were good. Confusing on who was who at first. Too much detail at times, not enough at others. Spelling errors that changed some words(probably got too worked up while writing it). Then story kinda ended too quick. Again...good concept, just needed to be edited a little.