by JanetHarper
Well that was without a doubt one of the silliest lines ever! Still laughing at how bad this was!
Hey, since this is a fictional story site anyway, I thought that this was a cute little seasonal addition. Thanks Janet, I have images of Santa dancing in my head.
Did Janet get her real present? Was it Santa's magic powder plus his cum that started Janet changing into woman.. Did she start growing a pussy under her cock and balls... Janet woke confused but saw a Christmasy note under the tree ... as she read it she smiled.. it said.. "you were naughty so I couldn't make you all woman :) .. maybe next year if you are still naughty Santa will return with more logic powder and cum for you.. of course Santa takes things away if you have been naughty ;) .. he may just take some things if you have been a bad boy and make you a good girl... Ho Ho Ho "
So, Santa fucks a tranny in the ass!
How many seconds did it take you to figure out this piece of un-clever shit?
And the horrible dialogue "I've been butt-fucking elves for a long time..."
The only people getting it in the ass are the ones who thought this hunk of shit would be clever or funny, instead of pathetic, which is what it is!
There may not be much Christmas spirit in my comments but there's not much of a story here, either!
There's nothing bad with this fictional story. I didn't care for it, but that's only my opinion. I did get a couple good chuckles from a few lines. If writing this story made you happy then screw all the people who post shitty comments under "anonymous ".
Loved it....definitely a very unique story! I will be thinking about Santa a bit differently now. :-)