by bluechick1976
Really well written...not sure if the theme is overly new but this was very descriptive and hot. Loved the way Santa revelled in the beauty of the female body (in this case yours). That's the way it should be - sexy and appreciative and then a combination of slow and soft and demanding and forceful. Well done.
Mrs Claus is going to be pissed if she ever finds out! Jessica had better hope that Mrs Claus is either A) not as clairvoyant as Santa and/or B) that Mrs Claus is bi-sexual or bi-curious at the very least! Fucking Santa: Definitely Naughty!
last year. Santa stopped at one house and did not deliver the rest of the toys. Definately a bad girl.
I like the way you had Santa Claus take Jessica'S virginity. It was a good story.
A very well written charming story. A very good read.
Hope you win
Nicely done, I enjoyed it and good luck. But it's just not fair. This contest Santa seems to be getting his rocks off with lots of girls - even those on the naughty list! Santa, Santa, I can be naughty too - where are yoo??
the presents at the end were a cute touch. Good luck in the contest!
Your story was so erotically CUTE, I had to give 5*. It was imaginative, erotic, and the characters were brought to life. Please write with more that 1 page, but PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING! THANKS!!!