All Comments on 'Santa Max'

Excellent Story...HO-HO

love the story so very hot and horny . do hope you do another very soon.

love the very exciting writing . reading this was like being there first watching you play with your pussy to a hard cumming then again to the second real cumming with santa

WOW! Excellent story- loved it. More from you Please.

You did a really nice job building the sexual tension and keeping the dialog going well. This could almost lend itself to a second chapter...

I do believe you will have quite a following! Well written, draws the reader into being there...and Hot on top of it all.

I/we look forward to more. Brava!

Dear Lady, You've raised the bar considerably with your debut in LIT. The female POV is wonderfully done and my own research is that such fierce libido is not just credible but factual. This is erotic, sensual, sexy writing that was very, VERY stimulating. Welcome. I hope your juicy body (of work I mean) keeps flowing. Kal

Great story, loved how the female character showed her passionate eroticism by herself before bringing Santa Max into tha action!

Very well written. Good command of the english language.

Should we now start a new sex dictionary starting off with a Pussy being referred to as a Chimney. Just loved it.

Great Job Lee and I loved how this story got to me, We are all looking forward to more of your words

I admire your talent! Well done. I do not know how much is based on actual happenings but you truly have me believing! I know I will read this again and more of your works. Keep me advised.

Great story! Loved this passage, it's so familiar:

"Please, honey..., I don't want to cum in your mouth the first time." He begged. "Please let me have your pussy first?" I eased up on him so he could calm down a bit but lapped at his dripping pre-cum before I then moved back up into his lap.

Very hot! xxoo

Great Santa story! I'm a believer...again!

Very nice you naughty lil girl;)~~ May have to hop in my sleigh and pay a non X-mas eve visit to you. mmmmmmmmmmmmm "go down" your chimney face first :)

For a promising new author. I hope her newly single life yields many more sexy stories.

LoveLee, first, great writing! This is after all a site for writers. You've shown here that you can do that. Wonderful style and pace. Second. Jeez you got me hard from the gitgo!. You didn't hold back, you gave us a sexual ride from a mature womanly point of view, a woman who embraces her sexuality. I am Awed.

Jay

Good erotic story.

I forgot to say 5 stars.

This was a charming and very highly erotic story. I hope you write more!! Five stars!!

... emotional; felt like I was there ... watching; well done for first story ...

A fantastic story and a hot and wonderful way to spend christmas

As a Santa myself, you thrilled me with your sexy tale. Maybe there is another 'Leigha' out there for this newly single Santa!