by nikki_bleu
I liked the story, I really did, but surely it is writen by a male!
A kids Mother is a MILF? Why would a girl call a Mother a MILF? Apart from the fact it actually a derogitary term, no female I know would refer to another femal as a MILF!
That aside it doesn't even fit into the story, you really should have left that whole bit out.
I really liked your story and looking forward to your next one. Now come sit on Santa's lap one more time young lady.
Thank's anonymous for your insightful comment. It was so helpful.