All Comments on 'Sapphira's Sin Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yes

thank you for adding the next chapter, it's been so long, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful

sapphira's giving sin a run for his money

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
whoo hoo!

I'm so glad you started writing again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loving this story.....

and the way that this chapter ended. My only hope it that the next chapter comes soon to follow up this awesome cliffhanger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I want to know what Sapphira wants

I have a feeling she's not quite sure herself. She definitely wants Sin, but not 100% on his terms. And I agree - that would make their relationship always uneven too heavily in his favor. Sin will need to find another route to winning her back than his usual "take no prisoners" approach. <br><br>

After the very public scene at the retirement party, I have a feeling Sapphira will feel (with justification) that her position at the company has been jeopardized. I could definitely see her deciding to move on to a different job, somewhere where the entire work force won't be speculating about her and the new CEO being current or past lovers. That would frustrate Sin no end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

yayyy i'm so glad you decided to continue. please keep going

marexotic18marexotic18over 16 years ago
please don't leave us hanging for another year!!

I like this story, both strong characters, Sin is kind of an ass, but hopefully he'll realize that subtle is definitely the way to go. Although they aren't dating, I hope he hasn't been sleeping with anybody else!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I love this story. I am totally intrigued. Please keep it going; can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
sapphira and sin

I love Sapphira and Sin! I'm so glad you updated and that their story's progressing! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yehey!

finally! have been waiting for the next chapter in sapphira and sin's story. hope the next one will be soon

neenee7neenee7over 16 years ago

more more of this one ch.7,8 more

sexcthingsexcthingover 16 years ago
more please...

yay.... you havent lost your touch it sounds like sin has got a lot of making up to do and i do hope they manage their own happy ever after....... please dont keep us wainting and i absolutely love your writing style....!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
OMG

How could you have the heart to leave us hanging like this:( Please please continue and finish this story as well as the other captivating stories of yours!

innocenttemptressinnocenttemptressabout 16 years ago
Ok, seriously...

you HAVE to continue this story!!! Don't keep us waiting anymore! Please finish!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Please!!!!!

I know your not gonna write another chapter for a long time but please dont do this. I love this story so much, i even had my friends read it. Please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Want more

I love this story line..please oh please write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More!

This is brilliant!! Please write more!

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