All Comments on 'Sar: First Mission'

Loved it. I hope you write more parts soon!!!

I not only enjoyed the erotic part but the action sci fi parts were captivating as well I hope to see a mission three soon

Thought to try another from emap, I really loved it. A lot of buildup, with an interesting storyline... Super well developed. I still see some sentence structure and punctuation issues, but I don't read erotica with an English teacher eye, so not really bothered by it. The sex scene, when it finally came, was absolutely worth the wait, very hot!

Do you always write in the present tense? Much harder for follow than past. Give it a try.