All Comments on 'Sara Ch. 01'

I think this is the best of our stories. I've read them all. You write with great emotion which make your stories outstanding. I really hope there will be many more

I liked the story, except for the subplot about the ex-girlfriend of the father. Did Sara sleep with her because she felt sorry for her, or because she was in love with her but knew they couldn't be together? Also, why would she do that if she didn't want to hurt her lover? It was a little confusing. Other than than nice story, very erotic at some points. Good job.

I loved this story. The fact that there was sub-plot made it attractive to me. There was, as in real life, the difficulties of coping with endings and beginnings. Well written and well done.

i just want to share with you that i just came by myself for the first time ever--without using a vibrator--reading your story. I've been trying for at least 4 or 5 years!!!!!!!!!!! i'm so happy, thank you for writing this!!

This was a pretty good story, but I found myself lost with timing. Maybe I read it wrong, but was there a time when you said how they became lovers other than making out, then all of a sudden "in love" with eachother? Other than that it was good story!