by hunterwren
The Sara story is becoming quite engrossing. I hope there's much more to come. I'd like to see you write a longer, more fully-developed tale than you have so far. Other writers do it, and they don't have half your talent.
chapter #2 EXCELLENT AND LEAVES THE DOOR OPEN FOR MANY MORE.
[PLEASE CONTINUE AS THIS S ONE OF THE BEST ON THE SITE
I can't believe you ended it like that. I want more, I want it finished. I want more of Sara and Rema.
Fantastic,love to read more,more please