by emma_sub
It's okay but it could've been hotter. Too much emphasis on how it feels to be controlled, not enough interaction with other characters. It could have been done with just Sarah and Mary and the story wouldn't have changed much.
Super hot! I love being in the mind of one so deeply controlled. I could almost feel myself slipping away the more I was reading.
P.s. It might help that my name is Sarah too ;)
Reminds me a lot of the mail girl stories. I also really like the slow burn as the narrator's mind is slowly corrupted.
One of the best stories I have ever read on this site...
An excellent slow build up of sexual tension.
this is so erotic, cant beleive it took me this long to find this exciting story, so good and well versed.