All Comments on 'Sara is Educated at College Pt. 01'

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Saphic_succubusSaphic_succubusalmost 6 years ago
Well ....

It's okay but it could've been hotter. Too much emphasis on how it feels to be controlled, not enough interaction with other characters. It could have been done with just Sarah and Mary and the story wouldn't have changed much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great work <3

Super hot! I love being in the mind of one so deeply controlled. I could almost feel myself slipping away the more I was reading.

P.s. It might help that my name is Sarah too ;)

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago
Really Great

Reminds me a lot of the mail girl stories. I also really like the slow burn as the narrator's mind is slowly corrupted.

TasteYourDesiresTasteYourDesiresover 4 years ago
Mmm.. so fucking hot

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
An excellent slow build up of sexual tension.

An excellent slow build up of sexual tension.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 3 years ago

this is so erotic, cant beleive it took me this long to find this exciting story, so good and well versed.

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