All Comments on 'Sarah and Me - A Marriage Story'

Both you and your editor need to learn the basics of writing.

if autobiographical, pathetic lives as well.

Tough . In every sense.

Difficult to understand, writer not fluent with english. Writing gets in the way of the emotional impact.

Tough life. Married the wrong woman. Ended up alone. Easy enough to see she was evil. After the fact, years later.

3*s for the pathos.

AMerryMan

the title sounds like it was written by a dyslexic child. Story wasn't that great either

What Marriage Idiot consign your stories to the loo you write absolute drivel

You write like a robot, neither characters have any morality, particularly Sarah who is a really stupid evil cow. How could he welcome her back? What an idiotic wimp.

She humiliates and craps all over him, they divorce. The new guy she marries beats her up until 3 years later she's back with her exhusband. I can deal with the writing and grammer, but his ex-wife returns a used , worn out old whore and he's happy? Author please include another chapter where the ex-husband gets the professional psychological help he desperately needs.

Liked the story, but was hard to follow and too short. Maybe the European sentence structure.

That was absolutely awful. Nothing good can be said about it. If I read it right, whore cheats serially, finally leaves to live with another man, comes back and the pathetic excuse of an ex-husband is glad to see her? What the fuck makes any sense about this?

Despite English not being your native language I found this story fascinating. It gave me insight into the Scandinavian way of thinking about sex and love. There is a practically that is alien to my experience with jealousy and anger.

I mainly disliked the story because of the horrible grammar. If you are planning on and english audience please have someone edit the story.