All Comments on 'Sarah Finds a Pinkskin Ch. 01'

by Damira

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AllintheheadAllintheheadover 6 years ago
Good

Good start but could have used more build up before jumping right into the sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Nice Opening Chapter but could you make it longer like 2 or 3 Pages. Not bad I like it 5 Stars at least

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