All Comments on 'Sarah, Jane and Dan Experiment'

Personally I can't stand being around drunks so I quit reading pretty quickly.

I gave it a 5 so as not to sound nasty. I would have read the story through if the characters had been sober.

Better to be drunk than moronic!

I have read your story and enjoyed it. I give it 100% to balance the lunatic who rates and criticises stories without reading them.

I think it was a really good story. i hope nobody regretted it and by the sounds of it no one was too drunk. If that was going to happen to me, i'd like to have it happen in a fairly similiar way!!

You have a real gift for letting your characters creep inch by inch into temptation... beautifully done! It's going on my "favorites" list!

The perfect blend of dialogue and description, and the gradual exploration of mutual desires was extremely arousing. Please, keep up the good work!

The escalation was perfectly done. Really seemed like it could (and hopefully did) happen in real life.

Not sure how you could improve on this story, but hope you keep trying. One of the hottest reads I have had in a while.

I know this is a dumb question, but you can't just get up and leave at this pont. Just when Sarah is going to be talked into licking some pussy for the first time in her young life. Please hurry with the next installment. This story is everything it should be with two wild and crazy girls. But get Sarah down there and put her to work satisfying Jane. Hurry, Please.

This is a very good story but you need to add more to it.

Please add a lot more to it.

Thanks

That was a good quick read without being unbelievable. You draw the characters in to a situation which, with a tiny leap of faith, is entirely plausible. I love how you do that, you never ask us to just accept the things that happen in your stories, you always justify them in some way.

great story seems plausible even

great great great!

This is what we have always wanted! Where can we find Sarah?

Steamy progression....very likable characters...love the girls checking out each other's bodies, and Sarah's mouthfuls, and muffin....

Omg nikki so sucking fucking hot. I loved it. I absolutely love cunt in every way, eating it out, filling it with my cock. I absolutely love to fuck a sexy woman while eating another, absolutely adore cunt, the more I get the more I want. Cunt struck fucker, Lancashire, UK.

Very hot and steamy story. My BF asked me about doing a 3-some, and while it makes me horny and wet thinking about it, I cant decide if I would rather the first time be with another girl or guy. I like the thoughts of eating another girl after my BF unloads in her, but having multiple cocks in me puts me over the edge. Lifes decisions can be hard....guess I'll have to try both to see. This was an inspiring story of knowing what I want. Warmy & wetly yours S :)