All Comments on 'Sarah's Photo Shoot'

This is really, really hot. I can't wait for more stories.

Absolutely loved your story. So well written and great detail. I can’t wait to read more.

The guilt gets to Liam,

"I'm sorry, mate. You have to break it off with Sarah. After the camera turned off, she wouldn't leave me be until I shagged her all night. She was on top of me texting you. She swore me to secrecy, but I thought you should know."

Four stars for eroticism, though. He should have more fun with her before he cuts her loose!

Well written. Very erotic. Hope there is more.

Very well-written story. Loved the gradual build-up, and I very much enjoyed how the photographer explored her submissiveness. You did a good job on the subject of erotic humiliation while maintaing a level of respect, both for Sarah and her fiance. Nicely done, keep up the good job!

Loved your stories sofar. Very well written. Great build up. Love to read more of Sarah's humiliation. Make it dirty!

Sarah should go back for a studio session with Liza as lighting assistant

I totally love both your stories. Lost the number of times i have read both. Please keep writing. Similar lines. Thank you

Well constructed and very erotic. My girlfriend and I often act out similar scenes from safety of hotel rooms but would love it to go that one step further. Going to let her read your story to give her some confidence

Omg man you have to keep writing. Loved both of Sarahs stories. I like that the stories are very focused on her, the fact that she actually has dialog, and how progressively her sluty side comes out. VERY NICE

❤. 👍👍!

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★★★★★ (5)

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👍👍

Excellent story. Very erotic. Very well written.

More crap.

what a shit rag of a story, and people

Both stories are great! I love Sarah

I can’t believe that after all that liam didn’t fuck sarah. He had her as putty in his hands and mouth. It’ll come out that he fucked her braind out.

"Not a good time. It's easier if I show you. And don't worry I didn't sleep with him. I can't wait to see you x"

Fucking lies. Of course she fucked him.

another happy cuckold, yuck

Great story. You should write more