All Comments on 'Sarah's Raincoat'

Under the care of a Doctor. Was she really that stupid? This was just a big mess.

Loved the story, a nice gentle tale. Just wished you could extend your stories, as I have enjoyed all three so far, but just feel that you could develope them further. But hey you are the one writing, so just do what feels comfortable.

As for the other two comments, each to their own, but my motto is if you don't like it, just move on, but don't discourage the people who take their time writing these stories. They cannot please everyone, and all tastes are different. Thats what makes this world so interesting.

Thank you Anonymous (no. 1), it does give encouragement to receive positive feed back, I am pleased you enjoyed the story. I have written longer ones and after polishing them up will post in the near future.

Jennifer

Another great story and deserves be be made much longer. I hope you write more chapters as you have set up a nice relationship between the two maybe they could win the lottery and buy the shop?