All Comments on 'Sarah's Skanky Revenge Ch. 05'

I had given up all hope of this story continuing, but here it was. Great story.

Sent you a message:) Hope to hear back

Really great story.

I kind of hope Holy gets together with Christy. Yes she's one of her bullies, but Christy seems like a decent person and clearly has something of a crush on Holly even if she doesn't know it.

Please give Holly revenge. It is time for the tables to turn on those girls.

Love this story, i keep checking every once in a while to check for updates. one of my favorites in this entire site. Hope it continues :)

You should keep writhing the storie with out a revenge it's a great one

you should make holly and Lliara try to make a revenge and fail and make them both slaves to Nicky.

i have never wank so good in my life juses!!!!!!!!! more i want it to be many more parts!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holly obviously isnt happy with dehydrated foods haha i think the girls should take it in turns to feed her their shit

I have never written a comment here before but needed to after reading this even to the point of signing up. This story is just so compelling that it's more than any other story I've read in a long time here. The characters are really engaging and showing development which is what you want to see. I really hope you continue this as this is a situation that needs attention. I'm very much enjoying the development of Holly and Christy as characters. I love the way that Holly is starting to think of girls as sexy and has become very interested in Christy almost to the point of wanting her more than the others. Christy you have really done good with in making her stand out as a girl who could very easily be tempted to one night get Holly alone and treat her as an equal in bed, giving Christy her first taste of a girls pussy and maybe if she gets caught causing some friction in the group. Perhaps Christy might try and go further with Melissa and set something up between them both. Just some ideas I had but I'm sure you will do great but I just wanted, no, needed you to know how appreciated this was. Please keep going!!!

I'm fairly new, but have been reading this story for a while, and have absolutely loved it. I've been bursting with ideas, but I had one in particular after reading this segment:

Basically, my idea is that Nicky also purchased a tap feature for the water bottle on the cage (rather like they have on those upside down bottles in bars and pubs), that, when opened halfway, would allow the contents of the water bottle to flow at a slow, steady trickle. And considering the nature of what they're doing to her, they might also have wanted her to experience two horrible things at once. So they purchased one of those special gags for her, the one that has a small pipe in the front going straight into the user's mouth. When Holly's in the cage, they can connect that small pipe on her gag to the water bottle with a long tube, seal it in place, fill the water bottle with their pee and open the tap about halfway so she has a constant stream flowing gently into her mouth. Then, when they fill the cage with their farts, Holly is forced to breath it in through her nose, while having a constant stream of pee flowing into her mouth. And for good measure, they could secure her hands behind her back so she can't turn the tap off.

Just an idea.

Actually genuinely curious to see how much worse things could get for Holly, or at least what Nicky's plans for her are. And as sad as it would be, I actually hope that she gets to try as many of them on her as possible before the story ends. Also, I don't know why, but the fact that Holly is such a nice person and the girls are all horrible actually somehow makes it better. I wouldn't have a problem with her being trapped by them forever.

LickableLucy23 absolutely has a delicious mind. I so hope you're not done writing.

Hasn't been an update in quite some time, which really sucks. Love this story!

this story is excelent you should finish it we have been waiting 2 years

It's been so long since we've heard from Holly and the 4 bitches of the apocalypse (as I've now taken to calling them). Hoping to God our wait will finally end soon!

Have had another idea for this story.

If you go down the route of Holly getting revenge on the girls, I'd love to see candle wax being used!

It's been quite a while, are you planning to finish this story? I would love for Holly to get revenge.

It's been quite a while, are you planning to finish this story?

Please write more part of this story plz plz plz

Please finish this great story

I saw you writte new chapter of another storie are you going to write another about this one?

Hi Everyone, sorry for such a long delay but there will be another part to this story before the end of 2018. Love & Licks, Lucy X X X X X

News of a new chapter right on the day I come back to check, nice

Great story i definitely would like to read more and more school things like maybe more girls learning a little more!

Omg been waiting forever for chapter 6 literally cannot wait 😁😁

ADDICTED to your stories. Can't wait for you to update us on this one and the Sorority Pledge one!

Chapter 6 plz

You promised a new chapter before the end of last year

Holly should get fucked In the ass by all 4 girls, whored out really cheap, Peirce's and tattooed

Sad it didn't come out before 2018. But I hope it comes out soon!

Love your story, the characters, and love where you're going with it (and no worries if you're done). Happy to be left thinking about Holly teaming up with her sweet tennis crush to fight back.

Plllz hurry and finish we need to know what happens

Hope another chapter soon

Plz write another chapter plz

How did the contest turn out? Did Holly get deeply involved with her delicious tennis team mate crush?? Don't make me beg.... OK, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

The last chapter for this was more than 5 years ago, and I'm still dying for a new one.

I sincerely hope Holly gets her revenge on the girls. And I hope it's directly proportional to what they did to her. As in... make. them. suffer.

You'r good you should keep going great storie

Maybe you should do a special where Holly is forced to isolate with the girls. Would love to know how she'd get through several months of forced isolation with only her tormentors for company.

awesome story, It has been awhile so I hope you revist this story as I believe is unfinished, or maybe I just want more of it... Love this one as much as I loved :sorority pledge. Both were really good,

Love the idea of her being trapped in isolation with then

is this the end?

next chapter. please

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Since you appear to be inactive, I know the chance of you reading this is small. You have a wonderfully creative and evil mind. I do think that less is more when it comes to your stories. Having the girls pee in Holly's mouth is hot when it is done sparingly, but it loses its effectiveness when it is done repeatedly. I hope you return to your stories someday as I really love the concept.

Still hopimg for more from this series

Just found this story, can’t believe there isn’t more!!

I’ve pretty much given up all hope of this being finished, so I’m just gonna offer up my headcanon as a solution, which is that Holly gets the various allies that are hinted at in this chapter to hide in her flat and ambush her tormenters. Christy and/or immediately flip and help Holly get hold of the footage the girls have taken, in return for being allowed to leave and never breathe a word of what happened. Sarah and Nicky are then subjected to an entire weekend of having everything they did to Holly done back to them, all on videotape. Sarah is blackmailed into becoming Lisa’s slave, and Nicky’s video is exposed online, causing her family to disown her and she ends up losing her entire lifestyle. Holly and Liliara get together. Melissa and Christy get together.