All Comments on 'Sarah's Story Ch. 02'

by DominicaPotestas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well this is the third day of this

and I think its pretty good! Would like to see what happens to poor Sarah and hope she gets her own back on these sadistic bastards!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It's terrible!

You are a sick person.

franksummersfranksummersover 14 years ago
Well textured world!

And good slave-girl fantasy! The world you've established (readers who haven't should go read her background essay) reminds me of a Romanized version of Sharon Green's Terrilian / Warrior fantasies of the 80s, great favorites of mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
me likey

y did you stop?

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyalmost 7 years ago
no happy endings here!!.....:((;)) sigh!!......

Boy boy...doesnt reality bite?!and sting?!:((;))....to think pretty Sarah will never get a happy endings chapter!! :((;))

And the signing off last line is win win...tug at the less crueler heartstrings!! ;))talented writing DominicaPotestas!! :))

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Update ?

Good story .

It’s abandoned ?

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