All Comments on 'Sara's Seduction'

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rearden_steel_2rearden_steel_2over 6 years ago
Well constructed

I always enjoy succubus stories. This one was pretty good.

rearden_steel_2rearden_steel_2over 6 years ago
You might enjoy my stories

Start with 'No going home'

mBrowmBrowover 6 years ago
Very good story

Great tension, plot, & eroticism. There were a few typos and many grammar errors, but the general quality of the narrative still held my attention. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Genuinely solid story.

I could see it being published in a sex and horror analogy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
srort5

Really good story. So saddened we didn't get evil vampire Sara.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Liked it a lot

I don’t see any other comments. I thought this was a well written, disturbing, and exciting story. Good job! I hope you submit more in the future.

SinseemsgoodSinseemsgoodover 2 years ago

Nicely written! Would have loved to see Sara also turning evil and hotter!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Verygoodbutwouldbeenbetterifsumofthehadgoneinhermouthsoshebecomsavampire

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