by doddauto
I always enjoy succubus stories. This one was pretty good.
Great tension, plot, & eroticism. There were a few typos and many grammar errors, but the general quality of the narrative still held my attention. Thank you!
I could see it being published in a sex and horror analogy.
I don’t see any other comments. I thought this was a well written, disturbing, and exciting story. Good job! I hope you submit more in the future.
Nicely written! Would have loved to see Sara also turning evil and hotter!