All Comments on 'Sara's Story Ch. 04'

Please continue this! Best thing I've read on this site.

Amazing.

It's a shame, given that you have someone helping you edit, that there are still mistakes in this story as it was, in a word, brilliant.

I almost gave up on it as I came in at Chapter 4 from 'Story Spinner', but the more I read, the more I enjoyed the way you managed to evoke images without necessarily being specific. I loved it all - well done!