All Comments on 'Sara's Undoing Ch. 02'

by Onyx03

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great work!! Enjoying this.

lickitandstickitlickitandstickitalmost 7 years ago
Love it

This is a very erotic story you've got going here, cant wait for the next chapter.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 6 years ago
Wonderful.

I can't tell you how much I like this paragraph:

"This is so humiliating." I say to her as I close my eyes again instantly consumed by my normal self consciousness. She can't refrain from chuckling. "No beautiful, that is how you think you should feel. This is an act of endearment. They are accepting you as their own,"

This story in general reminds me of my story "THE CLUB" by M. Baiter (Amazon) A place where people are free to be who they are... a "judgement free zone" as you said in part 1.

LaRascasseLaRascasseover 6 years ago

Good continuation. Hot and deliciously dirty. Love it so far.

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