All Comments on 'Sara's Wishlist'

Thank you to everyone who has read my first wishlist story, and especially those who have voted and chosen me as a favourite. You are all too kind.

I read through the story again after publication and can say that I'm not as good a proofreader as I thought I was, plus I think I rushed it a little. I'm sorry about both of those aspects.

I am writing a follow up story in between course work for my degree based on my antics at a pre-Christmas party. With the way things are going it might be ready for submission in the Summer! I will try harder to make it better than "Sara's Wishlist," I promise.

I will try to reply to anyone that has written to me personally, in good time.

Once again, thank you for being so kind.

Sara

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This was a very good, fast paced story with good plot and character development. Sara is definitely master at tease and manipulation.

That's why I love this story, it's got such a real dimension to it. I love how it's so sharp short and to the point, I imagine just like the writer. Young witty and very sure of herself.

Great stuff cant wait to read more. Can you please notify me as I can't get on Lit where I'm going please. apriliatuonoassen@gmail.com

Hot story! Hoping for a sequel.++

Great concept, well spun, with good pacing and believable characters. I could really imagine myself in either character's situation. Oh, and it was nicely erotic, too, of course! Will be watching for future chapters.

***Cute read thanks for sharing.