All Comments on 'Sarlene's Touch Ch. 05'

by Fuinimel

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BigWooSonBigWooSonover 14 years ago
Great!!!!

I love the way you've given each character their own point of view. Please continue, I await the next chapters.

If you ever need a proof reader let me know. I'm not a writter, reading and continuity are my gifts.

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